We bloggers all pay homage to Winston Weathers

From page 44 of An Alternate Style: Options in Composition:

I, for example, try to capture each day some of the moods/events/thoughts/insights that I have experienced—and though some of my “material” may benefit from a Grammar A articulation, a good deal of it would be robbed of its vitality and immediacy if I did not write it down in Grammar B. Much of my journal writing is creative—not “arty,” not the creative of “creative writing class”—but the creative of immediate unhampered recollection, expression, outpouring—and that creative confrontation of the days of my life more freely comes into existence through Grammar B verbalization than through Grammar A verbalization. That’s what my psyche tells me at least. And I am willing to go along with it.

It Starts with a Poem



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A few colleagues have been exchanging poems via our English and Foreign Languages
listserv. The poems have dealt with some less-than-positive learning experiences
the poets had suffered in grade school: bad methods, bad teachers, all producing
bad effects on learning….

The original poem was an unexpected gift from out of the blue—but from
a poet who has led us to expect such generous spontaneity. As usual, a wonderful
read. It was the camaraderie of the poetic response, however, that stimulated
me to plunge—somehow—into this dialogue. What fun….

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Difficulty, Toleranance, Love, Survival: Fathers and Sons In, Out, and At War



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"Murderer": A fitting final utterance to Art
Spiegelman’s novel, Maus.

All the brutality one expects in a poignant presentation of the Holocaust and
Nazi evil is present in this book, this "remarkable work" that Jules
Feiffer describes as "awesome in its conception and execution . . .
at one and the same time a novel, a documentary, a memoir, and a comic book."
As author/mouse protagonist Spiegelman departs from his father at the end of
Book I (subtitled "My Father Bleeds History")—briefcase in one
hand, cigarette in another, head down—he utters this depressing final
statement, "murderer." But he is not talking of the Nazis. His father
is the murderer, for Spiegelman has just learned that his father long ago, distracted
by grief and confusion over his wife’s suicide, destroyed the journals she had
kept of the war and Holocaust—journals she had intended to be a legacy
to her son.

Thus we end on a mighty ambivalence: the son exploding/apologizing, the father
exploding/apologizing, the father shaken at the son’s disrespect, the son pleading
for information, the son, mollified and leaving in peace but uttering alone,
again, and finally, the word, ". . . murderer."

Of all the powerful dimensions of this work—its compelling stories, its historical
sweep, its psychological layers—and of course all the issues of media, text,
poetics, and rhetoric—it is the father-son relationship that I connect to foremost
of all. Art’s relationship with his father is taut with mixed feelings: of annoyance,
respect, understanding, awe, contempt, despair, pride, grief, and more. In this
sense, the book is probably resonant to every child who had a father, or rather
every child who had a father who was present as the child grew into adulthood.
But there is something about the quality, or perhaps the actual content, of
the relationship—both aspects, the positive and negative—that reminds me of
my relationship with my father.

My father could be a difficult man, but reading a book like Maus makes
me look to the Depression, World War II, and all the other stresses of the twentieth
century as causes of that difficulty. And I should be honest: some of the difficulty
stems from my personality, with its inward ways, much like Spiegelman’s. For
I need but look at my brothers, Joe in particular, who has written most lovingly
and accurately of our father’s uniqueness. Take
a look at his touching and fun memoir here
. But there is something in Spiegelman’s
portrayal of his father that rings an eerie bell. The frugality, the directness,
the aggressive care of both men are striking. Nothing of hesitation or shyness
in either of these men. And yet at the same time, the shocking tenderness from
time to time. Can these qualities be attributed, somehow, to the effects of
living through the twenties, thirties, and forties and surviving despite it
all?

Or is it just a matter of being in a family and taking what comes with the
territory? Maus raises questions of family dynamics of incredible and
deep resonance. Spiegelman interweaves tales of marital discord, parental scolding,
and typical family squabbles with episodes of unspeakable heroism, courage,
and good and bad fortune. Through it all there is one given: survival. On the
one hand there is an incredible closeness in this family (all families) that
allows the most extreme circumstances just to be. It all hangs out there—in
"dissolution," I’d call it: an agreement to look beyond the unresolved
matters in a way that is completely natural in families, as it is nowhere else.
On the other hand, there is the opposite of closeness and tolerance and acceptance,
for here are people so different, so uninvolved . . . just so very
different. Part of the magic of Maus is its portrayal of two "aliens"
sharing a space and entering into one another’s world. The father brings Art
into his past—not only the war, but also his youth and life, including
his early romances, his struggles to establish himself, his rhythms of life.
And the son attempts to bring the father into the writer’s/artist’s world he
inhabits. That’s something I never attempted with my father, and I’m not sure
I could, so I envy Spiegelman that expression and honesty.

The depictions of the family ambivalences are not all as poignant and disturbing
as the heart-wrenching final word of Volume 1. Some of the narration is borderline
humorous. There is the episode when Art, at the conclusion of one interview
session can’t find his coat. We soon find that the father—who is a renowned
miser, (a stereotypical Jewish miser, Art fears)—has thrown out Art’s
coat. For the father has (1) bought himself a new coat, (2) decided that Art’s
coat was shabby, and (3) decided to give Art his old coat. Art is incredulous:
"Oh great, a Naugahyde windbreaker!" And here is a case where Spiegelman’s
artistic talent comes to the fore: for the depiction of Art/mouse in the puffy
jacket conveys the archetypal embarrassment every child has suffered at the
hands of parents who find ingenious ways to exert control and inflict humiliation.The
expression on Art’s face as he walks home, slouched in the puffy jacket (it
should be noted he is thirty years old at the time), is priceless, as is his
comment: "I just can’t believe it. . . ."

In the context of such disbelief and anger and frustration, Spiegelman tells
his father’s story. Compassion, awe, and tender love are thrown into the telling
in a way worthy of the complexity of family life and the suffering of a terrible
World War. In all, Maus is a "survivor’s tale" that takes
us into unexpected dimensions of just what survival is. In its seamless interweaving
of tales—further complicated by our own connections to them—we are
often, like Art himself, left incredulous, but we are grateful for the experience,
the honesty of it, the reality of it—all in a comic book about a family
of mice that escaped the exterminator.


Reflective Action or Reflective Living?



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Blogger’s Note: This reflection was written in response to
a class reflection
written by Carol Medrano for one of her courses in the graduate reading program. Carol’s essay may be read by clicking this link
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Carol–I appreciate this opportunity to engage in a little dialectical discussion
with you here, so thanks for asking me to take a look at your reflection. Several
thoughts . . . I’ll share a few (ah, summer, when I can play hookey from the
required task, whatever it is, and diverge a bit in some side roads of thinking
and discussion):


You do a wonderful job countering the myth that reflection is solely a private
activity. It’s social. You summarize many other features from the analysis of
Dewey, but the social aspect is your main focus.

As teachers, the challenge is, "How do we create spaces, opportunities, requirements/threats/cajolings/pleadings
for reflective action? for reflective dialectical action?" It’s challenging,
but I’m beginning to see ways whereby the whole class can be organized–at the
point of conception–around the needs/rewards/dynamics of reflection.

The challenge becomes not merely one of having a single "reflective action"
added on at the end of something, but to have the reflective attitude guide
the process of learning from the onset and throughout. Part of this can’t be
taught, of course. Some people are "naturally" more prone to reflective
stances than others, etc. But reflectiveness can certainly be coached in all….
And therein is the challenge.

There’s a similar problem with group work. How do you shift from an ineffective
and rather typical use of small groups (I’ll characterize this ineffective use
as isolated instances of small group work thrown in randomly from time to time
to address certain lesson needs) to a more effective practice in which the teacher
perpetually supports and coaches collaborative interaction as a genuine social/intellectual
skill and disposition? One solution, I think, is to start your pedagogical planning
(in July) with the principles of "group" in mind rather than the task
they’ll be doing. Our usual procedure is to start with the lesson, and from
there proceed to the method of group work for engaging in the lesson. I’m suggesting
we turn the planning around. Why not start all our planning with the idea of
the group as the pincipal thing? We then ask in our day-to-day planning, "What
activities support, challenge, grow the group….?" We design learning
goals, curricular approaches, activities, etc. with the idea of the group impact/dynamics
invovled. In essence, the group becomes the organizing principle of our teaching
rather than the lesson itself.

The same holds true for reflection. How do we organize things if our main objectives
are rooted in the processes of reflection rather than the external learning standards,

curricula, etc. that are handed over to the teacher (often with a flick and a
threat)?

I’m beginning to see ways of doing this kind of reversal of prioritization.
But it’s really more than merely making a "priority" of reflection
or collaboration. It’s deeper; it’s starting with reflection and collaboration
as founding principles that give rise to all else. And at this point, I’ll close,
and only suggest that yes, I’ve begun to glimpse ways of organizing this way
(and relegating standards, goals, curricula, and other externals to afterthoughtsserious
afterthoughts that exert powerful shaping influences, but that keep their place,
too :).

But I have an exit analogy–on a somewhat negative slope. I’m reminded of
other highly effective organizations that might serve as models for the planner
of reflective/collabortive pedagogies: the military, cults, and gangs. They
start out with organizing principles of the "group," the "unit,"
"loyalty," "obedience," "duty," etc. They build
the organization first, and then apply actions to this or that situation. But
there is nothing "ad hoc" about these groups (unlike us in school
who are often so perilously ad hoc). These organizations are modes of being;
they are so un-ad hoc that, on their surface, their routines apppear to be the
antithesis of pragmatic, efficient action. Rather than dealing with the specific
issue at hand ("today’s lesson") they deal with the organizaiton
itself
–its needs, its values, its code. But ultimately pragmatism and
efficiency do get nailed, and big time. But what if–in thinking about how to
coach reflection and collaboration–we look to the rituals and principled modes
of organization of the military, cults, and gangs?


Montana, 1948, Isolation, Adolescence. . . 



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Of the many reactions I had to Montana, 1948, the one that stands
out is my appreciation of the narrator. He’s an adolescent boy, caught in the
middle of things within and beyond him—his childhood, adult crimes and
crises, differing forms of love, punishments, justice, and various kinds of
typical and atypical forces. The boy is archetypally "adolescent"
(I can’t even recall his name at this point, though it was only a few weeks
ago that I read the novel). In him meet all kinds of extreme forces, and his
narration provides a patient and deep view of internal and external turbulence.
He explains, for instance, how he is driven by a type of unconventional "wildness"
(this aspect of him is so internalized that no observer could have ever detected
it through the boy’s behavior or speech); most of all, of course, he is afflicted/affected
by the fierce landscape of Montana, 1948, a place and time whose "definition"
winds up being the full presentation of the novel itself.

This book teaches, in its quietly desperate way, the need for extended
definition. In doing so, it prompts sympathy, the humane outcome of understanding
and involvement. The book takes us into troubling extremes, the real history
of a place, the kind of history that is never written in history books, but
only literature, and here in the form of "sexual abuse, murder, suicide"
(170). Read hastily or inattentively, this extended definition of Montana, 1948,
might well lead us to an easy outsider’s conclusion, as typified in the comment
of the narrator’s wife years later at a family meal: "David [ah, that’s
the boy’s name! I found it in looking up this quotation] told me what happened
when you lived in Montana. That sure was the Wild West, wasn’t it?" But
the more proper conclusion comes from the father’s almost violent and deeply
resonant (to David) response: "Don’t blame Montana! […] Don’t ever blame
Montana!" (175).

Amidst it all—between the wildness and the father’s fierce final defense
of Montana, the boy is there—invisible and serious—and he holds
his world together. Amidst all the extremes swirling around him, he functions
and acts—or rather just functions. Action is for adults. The boy is not
a major player in the unfolding crises, but all the events register with him;
they take root in his understanding, and so we have to ask, to what extent do
they become his understanding? Whatever effect they have, the influence
in one-directional: the boy is a recipient of Montana, 1948, not an agent in
it.

The isolation of adolescence is archetypal, and the depiction of it in this
novel reverberates in my unconscious and in the collective unconscious, one
feels, of all who have survived adolescence. The boy is just part of the landscape,
and he is maneuvered around by his parents and others as they attempt to solve
monumental personal, family, professional, and community problems. Everything
David hears—he hears a lot—is overheard. At one point he wishes,
poignantly, that someone would just talk to him about the goings on—to
have things explained, to provide him his opening, to have a discussion, to
break through the loneliness, to set right some of the upheaval….

The boy remains quiet, and the cauldron simmers, though the lid never blows.
On the one hand, I’m reminded of a quote from somewhere in The Rhetoric
of Motives
by Kenneth Burke. Burke says (I’m paraphrasing), as though to
offer a formula for mental health therapy: find the secret; therein
the neuroses lie… This boy is beset with secrets. He learns, even as his mother
and father learn, of the secret crimes of Uncle Frank, the town’s doctor and
a respected pillar of the community. Despite his sophistication and power, Uncle
Frank has committed grievous crimes, and these crimes command redress. The burden
of addressing Frank’s actions falls primarily to David father, Frank’s brother,
who happens to be the town’s sheriff. But a deep portion of the burden falls
to David, who must come to terms with the brutalities and the confusions of
Frank’s actions. And in following David’s narration, we chart a process with
odd resonances to similar times when our characters were tested and buffeted.
For while most of us do not have an uncle like Frank, all adolescents/adults
have been tormented by "the secret"—if not of sexual abuse,
murder, and suicide, at least of sexuality, competition, and
guilt.

Like the best optimistic Young Adult fiction, the story chronicles a survivor’s
tale. What it doesn’t do is glorify the bravado or authority of adolescence
the way so much of our culture so stupidly does. I bemoan the cult of adolescent
superiority that runs rampant in our culture. Adolescent cool, the cluelessness
of adults, the liberations of sex, drugs, and extremes—whatever its forms,
such romantic nonsense gratifies adolescents with an opiate of assurance—however
wrongheaded, dangerous, or just plain irrelevant that assurance is to the real
afflictions at hand. Montana, 1948 depicts a sensitive, intelligent,
virtuous—and yes, confused—child-adult mixing it all up in the quiet
chaos of ordinary life. David is not "cool," but his shortage of cool
and superiority is as relevant to his problems as the shortage of bourbon was
relevant to the problem of all that extra ice on the Titanic. As we read on,
we see that this kid needs the adult world, and he is unapologetic
in that need. Unfortunately, the adult world is just "there" for him.
But truth be told, he is just "there" for the adults, too.

So the story takes root. Individuals, though intertwined, fail to interact—at
least overtly. Deep down, in the secret recesses of individual psyches, the
wounds reverberate. Adolescence is tough, but the realistic portrayal of it,
in literary works like Montana, 1948, brings redemption and satisfaction,
if belatedly. . . .